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And with all the courage in the world you could get, you formed a twisted smile of your own and said:

"Let's play."


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"You have a ten minute head start~"

You eyed the man with distrusting eyes, but stood and eyed the door. The 'other' England, as you decided to call him, moved out of your way, giving you full access to the door. Warily, you made your way to the door.

"You have ten minutes before I come after you~" He said in an almost sing-song voice. "Use what time you have to prepare yourself, love."

With a scowl on your face, you threw open the door and bolted down the hallway, his twisted laughter echoing behind you. Without glancing over your shoulder, you ran straight for the front door. Of course, it was locked. Next option. You bolted to the living room, looking for something to use as a weapon. With nothing in sight there, you made your way to the kitchen. At least you could find a knife there, right? As you were searching drawers for a decent weapon, you heard the other England's voice.

"Tick tock on the clock, love~ Your time is running out!" He added a small chuckle at the end that sent shivers down your spine.

"Damn it!" You cried, still searching for something to use. Finding nothing, the next place to check was the closets.

First the broom closet in the kitchen. You flung it open, only to find a broom, a dust pan, and chemicals for various things, along with buckets and cleaning supplies. You groaned, knowing he would soon be coming after you.

The next closet was the bathroom closet, though you had no idea why there would be a weapon in there, and decided to skip it.

The third was in a random room you hadn't noticed before. It was a library. Did he like to read..? No! Weapons! Must find weapons! You searched frantically for anything of use, and found nothing. It was as though he hid all weapons in advance to this little 'game'. You sighed and contemplated your options.

In a few minutes, he would be coming down those stairs to find you unprepared and unable to defend yourself much. All you had was physical strength, which still wasn't up to par due to being tied up for who knows how long. You sighed in frustration, but refused to admit defeat. You were going to get away and back to your England, and you'd be damned if you didn't.

"Come out come out wherever you are, ______~"

You jumped and sprinted out of the room, forced into plan B: Hiding. Left, right.. Which way do you go? You went right and further down the hall. You noticed a door under the stairs, and flung it open. Inside were various things, but one thing in particular caught your attention: an aluminum baseball bat.

Carefully you grabbed it and shut the door without making a sound, then started back down the hall. You heard his footsteps approaching down the stairway.

"You can't hide from me, love~"

You could imagine his twisted grin on his face as he said that, which made you shiver. You looked over your shoulder to see his shoes at the middle stair. You shrieked silently and continued into another hallway off of your current one. This one was more ominous, probably because of the poorer lighting found here. As you ventured further down it, features got harder to make out, and your hand ran along the wall instead. The only noise to accompany you was the sound of your heart beating against your chest. Then your hand hit something. It was a doorknob.

Quickly, you opened the door and hid inside. You felt scared, but slightly safe here. From what you could feel, you were in a cramped storage closet. The air smelled musty, and you couldn't tell when the last time was it was opened to air out. Your elbow hit something in the closet, and something yelled out:

'CALL 9-1-1 NOW!'

You shrieked and tried to get it to stop as heavy dub-step played out after the scream. You heard footsteps approaching, and knew it was no use. The music continued to play, seeming to fit this scene almost too well. Your heart pounded so hard it threatened to burst from your chest. You readied the bat over your shoulder, preparing a great swing for the man waiting on the other side of that door.

The door knob was turned, and the door opened, but due to the darkness, you couldn't tell. The other England sighed when he heard the thing playing music.

"Stupid thing.. It always does that.." He started groping around for the music-playing whatever it was, nearly touching you in the process. You held your breath. The atmosphere between you two allowed you to be able to feel how close he was to you, as well as to almost touching you. He continued to feel around, and found the thing rather than you. He stopped the music and set it back in the closet. Hesitating for a moment, he stared into the blackness of the closet, but directly into your eyes. You didn't dare make a move. Slowly, he closed the door and you heard footsteps wandering away.

Once you could no longer hear him, you opened the door and stepped back into the hallway. You hurried toward the well-lit hallway only to find something fall over your mouth and nose. You started feeling drowsy. He had used chloroform, that son-of-a-

You passed out, but not before you heard his voice say:

"England one, ______ zero~"
I know this chapter's kinda short, but I promise chapter 4 will be longer! I'll try to have the next chapter up Saturday.

So yeah, this is the first chase, or as 2P!England would call it, the 'first round' of the game. (hehe, you just lost it) Also, some language in this one. Not much, but a bit.

I have an idea for one of the more lovey-dovey chapters. I think you guys will like it.

And by the way, YOU GUYS ARE AMAZING. I haven't had so many favorites and watchers ever. You guys are truly AMAZING. Thank you so much for the comments and the support. It means a lot to me, guys. :)

In case you guys are wondering, the song that starts playing in the closet is this one: [link]

I do not own Hetalia.
I do, however, own the preview picture.
And you.. Who owns you..? ...Who?

Oh, and enjoy the cupcakes!

Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [X]
Chapter 4: [link]
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Vivida00 Featured By Owner 4 days ago  Student General Artist
Skrillex xD that part was awesome
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YuuKuroyama Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
SKRILLEX! HELL YEAH!
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HetaliaRCPG Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2015
Oh god, dear Oliver! I love 2ps so much! That gave me a heart attack!
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Who else thought of the song "Hide and Seek"(Ding, dong, hurry up I'm starving...)
Awesome story!!!~
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misaosachiko Featured By Owner Oct 21, 2014  Student General Artist
i was listening to that and then i went on this (btw luv ur profile pic) :)
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I just noticed...
Is that...pasta that is hanging off of a fork?
XD
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misaosachiko Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2014  Student General Artist
yeah....Hetalia Spinning Italy Pasta Icon Ve~ 
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FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XDDDD
Sorry...I can't stop laughing...
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ChowChowHowHow Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2014  Student Artist
This is kinda like saw kinda freaked out!!!
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RoseMaylieGottschalk Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
AHHHHH 
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TDarkhamgirl Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist
Why didn't reader-chan just mixs together all those cleaning chemicals together and use that ?

Oliver:England 1 Kelsey 0
Me: congratulation now here's your price *kisses his cheek*
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xXNonakXx Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Reader-tan was in a bind and didn't have time to think about that. uwu
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TDarkhamgirl Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2014  Hobbyist
true true *nods*
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xXNonakXx Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Ye. uwu
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everdeen127475 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Student Writer
I love that song!!
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DoctorWhoCutie Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I'm Narnia. You can't kill me England. You know that. I have been home to many wars.
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CrazyToyGirl Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist
FUCK WEPONS!! I MADE A GIRL BLEED AND GO TO THE HOSPITAL WITH MY CLAWS AND TEETH!!! Oh my, did i say that out-loud? ^\^
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Chibi-Katana Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
My friend uses books all the time in role play. She calls it a 'maka-chop' where you slam the spine of the book onto someone's head. She's done it to me in real life before too. It hurts like heck.... Anyway~! Can't wait to read more! You're a fanfic genius!!!
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swreld-star Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
i bet when  i wake up i am going to be tied up on a bed naked or maybe that's just my mind talking to me Hurrhurr 
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AnimezingOtaku Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
(The library part) "Knowledge is your greatest weapon! Arm yourself!!!" :iconairfrommylungsplz: "Dammit, Reader-Chan should've gone for the books!"
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Angelicam18 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So school is usefull! :O
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AnimezingOtaku Featured By Owner Jun 5, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:iconlegaspplz:
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xXNonakXx Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
e 7 e Should've done so indeed.
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AnimezingOtaku Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Yup~! Reader-Chan needs some more air from my lungs~! :iconairfrommylungsplz: (I just love that gif of :iconninthdoctorplz:)
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xXNonakXx Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
XD
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animezing99 Featured By Owner May 5, 2014
Books! Best weapons in the world
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AnimezingOtaku Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
BOOKS!!!!!
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animezing99 Featured By Owner May 17, 2014
Books :D
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AnimezingOtaku Featured By Owner May 17, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:iconcelebrateplz:BOOKS!:iconcelebrateplz:
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animezing99 Featured By Owner May 26, 2014
lol
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elephantgirl202 Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2014
me thinking: When I wake up Imma beat the ever living insane sh*t out of him the force feed him a poisoned cupcake then use 2p!Alfred's bat then use 2p!Canada's hockey stick! Then chop his head off with a battle axe and put his head over my bed!
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xXNonakXx Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
o 7 o;; W-Well now.. That escalated quickly.
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elephantgirl202 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014
me: Meh... what can I say... Viking!
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VargasLovesPasta Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
D: I~a wanted to sleep in~a one of the bedrooms
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xXNonakXx Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
o 7 o
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Fantasy-Girl8 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Love that song and great story by the way!!!!
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xXNonakXx Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Thanks! >7<
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Fantasy-Girl8 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Your welcome!!!
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unarii Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Professional Traditional Artist
Now its my turn....America...
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xXNonakXx Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
owo?
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nyanmeowth Featured By Owner Feb 25, 2014  Student Artist
Dammit First of The Year!!! Y U PLAY
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xXNonakXx Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Llama Emoji-01 (Laughing) [V1] 
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S0ulH4cker Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DAMMIT, SKRILLEX FUCKED ME OVER
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xXNonakXx Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Llama Emoji-01 (Laughing) [V1] 
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gab226789 Featured By Owner Feb 1, 2014  Student Writer
Me:hmmmmm lets see what we've got so far: Baseball bat useful, Skrilliex call 911 scaring the crap outta meh, aaaaand me totally defenseless after being faced with chloroform by a sadistic son of a bitch....... yea I am like totally screwed


Oliver: Of course you are poppet Big Fool Emoji-12 (Pervy Flirt) [V2] 

Me: STFU OLIVER IM HAVING A MOMENT IN MY MIND

Oliver: Fine, fine but you still owe me 20$ poppet

Me: Just kill me now =_=
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LaurenJr Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013
Come on me you have got to run like an Italian for the last dish of Pasta!!!
...... (Le timeskip to the end)
Aw man, see me- this is why we don't challenge sadistic murders to a 'game'!
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VargasLovesPasta Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
No, you~a have to run like~a me when the Britains are~a coming
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xXNonakXx Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Llama Emoji 34 (Sexy Smile) [V2] 
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PokemonTrainerFer Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2013  Student General Artist
SKRILLEX YUS!
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xXNonakXx Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
>w<
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